(Note : I'm not writing about myself.)
I can see your fulfilling smiles even through those stainless steel braces.
I can endear your curly hairs even through those tied up laces,
I can peer your curvy hips even through those piles up dresses.
I can hear your husky voice even through those unknown masses,
I can fear your lusty entice even through those unfamiliar messages.
I can stare your feisty vibes even through those unspoken speeches,
I can spare your hasty denies even through those wishful eyelashes.
I can bear your amity gaze even through those unintentional acknowledges,
I can tear your misty rage even through those rare acquaintances.
I can be your sparkling star in the sky even through those numerous attentions I face,
I can be your knight in shining armor even through those difficulties I have to embrace.
Last but not the least for the readers,
You can utter the honest moments even through those harsh phrases,
You can shower the achiest comments even through those words which are doubtless.
You can capture the modest torrents even through those life's obstacles countless.
Thank you for your time. :) :)
You can capture the modest torrents even through those life's obstacles countless.
Thank you for your time. :) :)
Wow Loved it Shaku..U can wrtie amazing poems as well. The feelings in da poem are awesome. Ya love is not done by looking at what is outside itz the heart inside.
ReplyDeleteahhh!! saathi... am loving the formation of sentences in the poem... they don't falter at all... i think you are better at writing poems than articles...!! malai yo sarai maan paryo!!
ReplyDeleteHey there, two of my sweet buddies thanks for encouraging me. Appreciate it a lot. N Strophy u r right, i like to write poems rather than articles thats y its better than articles. :) Samby i still need to write better to be able to write like you. Hehe cheers
ReplyDeletejust loved your writing .. its really nice
ReplyDeletetrue...everyone is beautiful and handsome, it jst depends on the viewer
ReplyDeletereally enjoyed your poem :)
thanks Swantina.
ReplyDeleteAni thanks to ARUN as well